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\u7b54\u6848\u53ef\u80fd\u4ee4\u4eba\u4e0d\u8212\u670d\u3002. \u9999\u6e2f\u7684\u6587\u6848\u5931\u6557\u4e26\u975e\u56e0\u70ba\u6587\u6848\u5beb\u5f97\u4e0d\u597d\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u56e0\u70ba\u6587\u6848\u7684\u6295\u653e\u6642\u6a5f\u4e0d\u5c0d\u3002.<\/strong><\/p>\n

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So the real test of a page is not “is this well written?” It is: \u9019\u4e00\u9801\u56de\u7b54\u4e86\u4ec0\u9ebc\u554f\u984c\uff1f\u800c\u6b63\u5728\u95b1\u8b80\u9019\u4e00\u9801\u7684\u4eba\uff0c\u73fe\u5728\u771f\u7684\u5728\u554f\u9019\u500b\u554f\u984c\u55ce\uff1f<\/strong><\/p>\n

\u5982\u679c\u9019\u4e00\u9ede\u932f\u4e86\uff0c\u518d\u600e\u9ebc\u4fee\u6539\u4e5f\u7121\u6fdf\u65bc\u4e8b\u3002\u5982\u679c\u9019\u4e00\u9ede\u5beb\u5c0d\u4e86\uff0c\u5373\u4f7f\u662f\u5e73\u6de1\u7121\u5947\u7684\u6587\u5b57\u4e5f\u80fd\u6253\u52d5\u4eba\u5fc3\u3002.<\/p>\n

\u6bcf\u500b\u9999\u6e2f\u5ba2\u90fd\u6703\u7d93\u904e\u5605\u4e09\u500b\u6642\u523b<\/h2>\n

\u8cb7\u5bb6\u5f9e\u4f86\u4e0d\u6703\u4ee5\u4e00\u7a2e\u72c0\u614b\u51fa\u73fe\u3002\u4ed6\u5011\u901a\u5e38\u6703\u4ee5\u4e09\u7a2e\u72c0\u614b\u4e4b\u4e00\u51fa\u73fe\uff0c\u800c\u4e14\u6bcf\u7a2e\u72c0\u614b\u63d0\u51fa\u7684\u8981\u6c42\u90fd\u4e0d\u540c\u3002.<\/p>\n

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  1. \u964c\u751f\u4eba\u3002<\/strong> \u4ed6\u5011\u6839\u672c\u4e0d\u77e5\u9053\u4f60\u7684\u5b58\u5728\u3002\u554f\u984c\u662f\uff1a “is this even the right kind of company for my problem?”<\/em> \u4ed6\u5011\u60f3\u8981\u7684\u662f\u8a8d\u53ef\uff0c\u800c\u4e0d\u662f\u8aaa\u670d\u2014\u2014\u4ed6\u5011\u60f3\u8981\u770b\u5230\u81ea\u5df1\u7684\u8655\u5883\u88ab\u91cd\u65b0\u63cf\u8ff0\u3002.<\/li>\n
  2. \u6bd4\u8f03\u7dca\u3002<\/strong> \u4ed6\u5011\u6253\u958b\u4e86\u4e09\u500b\u6a19\u7c64\u9801\uff0c\u4f60\u7684\u6a19\u7c64\u9801\u662f\u5176\u4e2d\u4e4b\u4e00\u3002\u554f\u984c\u662f\uff1a “why you instead of the other two?”<\/em> \u4ed6\u5011\u60f3\u8981\u5177\u9ad4\u7d30\u7bc0\uff1a\u7bc4\u570d\u3001\u65b9\u6cd5\u3001\u5305\u542b\u54ea\u4e9b\u5167\u5bb9\u3001\u4e0d\u5305\u542b\u54ea\u4e9b\u5167\u5bb9\u3002.<\/li>\n
  3. \u6c7a\u5b9a\u7dca\u3002<\/strong> \u4ed6\u5011\u95dc\u4fc2\u5f88\u8fd1\u3002\u554f\u984c\u662f\u2026 “what happens if I send this message?”<\/em> \u4ed6\u5011\u60f3\u77e5\u9053\u8ab0\u6703\u56de\u590d\uff0c\u56de\u590d\u901f\u5ea6\u5982\u4f55\uff0c\u4ee5\u53ca\u56de\u5fa9\u662f\u5426\u610f\u5473\u8457\u4ed6\u5011\u5fc5\u9808\u505a\u51fa\u4efb\u4f55\u627f\u8afe\u3002.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

    \u5927\u591a\u6578\u9999\u6e2f\u4e2d\u5c0f\u4f01\u696d\u7684\u7db2\u7ad9\u90fd\u662f\u70ba\u964c\u751f\u4eba\u64b0\u5beb\u6bcf\u4e00\u9801\u5167\u5bb9\u3002\u9996\u9801\u4ecb\u7d39\u516c\u53f8\u7c21\u4ecb\u3002\u670d\u52d9\u9801\u9762\u518d\u6b21\u8a73\u7d30\u4ecb\u7d39\u516c\u53f8\u72c0\u6cc1\u3002\u806f\u7d61\u9801\u9762\u53ea\u6709\u4e00\u500b\u8868\u683c\uff0c\u9664\u6b64\u4e4b\u5916\u5225\u7121\u5176\u4ed6\u3002.<\/p>\n

    \u8cb7\u5bb6\u5728\u505a\u6c7a\u5b9a\u7684\u95dc\u9375\u6642\u523b\u770b\u5230\u9019\u4e00\u9801\uff0c\u537b\u5b8c\u5168\u4e0d\u77e5\u9053\u63a5\u4e0b\u4f86\u6703\u767c\u751f\u4ec0\u9ebc\u4e8b\u2014\u2014\u6240\u4ee5\u4ed6\u5011\u4ec0\u9ebc\u90fd\u6c92\u505a\u3002\u9019\u4e0d\u662f\u5beb\u4f5c\u554f\u984c\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u9019\u4e00\u9801\u56de\u7b54\u4e86\u4e00\u500b\u6c92\u4eba\u554f\u904e\u7684\u554f\u984c\u3002.<\/p>\n

    \u7528\u771f\u5be6\u6578\u5b57\u7747\u4fc2\u9ede\u6a23<\/h2>\n

    \u6211\u5011\u7684\u4e00\u4f4d\u5ba2\u6236\uff0c, \u5c1a\u65b9\u7f6e\u696d\u6709\u9650\u516c\u53f8<\/a>, \u7d93\u71df\u4e00\u500b\u623f\u7522\u8cc7\u8a0a\u7db2\u7ad9\uff0c\u8a72\u7db2\u7ad9\u4e0a\u6bcf\u500b\u623f\u6e90\u9801\u9762\u7684\u6587\u6848\u90fd\u570d\u7e5e\u8457\u4e00\u500b\u554f\u984c\u5c55\u958b\uff1a “is this specific flat worth my Saturday?”<\/em> Not “why choose us”. Not “our team has 20 years of experience”.<\/p>\n

    \u5728\u6700\u8fd1\u4e00\u500b\u6708\u7684\u7a97\u53e3\u671f\u5167\uff0c\u8a72\u7db2\u7ad9\u8a18\u9304\u4e86 \u8d85\u904e 18,000 \u540d\u8a2a\u5ba2\uff0c\u5176\u4e2d\u8d85\u904e 3,400 \u540d\u4f86\u81ea\u514d\u8cbb\u641c\u7d22\uff0c\u53e6\u6709\u8d85\u904e 290 \u540d\u5ba2\u6236\u9032\u884c\u4e86\u8aee\u8a62\u3002<\/strong>, \u5927\u7d04 \u6bcf\u500b\u9ede\u64ca HK$0.33<\/strong> \u4ed8\u8cbb\u5167\u5bb9\u3002\u6587\u7b46\u4e26\u975e\u6587\u5b78\u5316\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u56de\u7b54\u8b80\u8005\u5728\u95b1\u8b80\u6642\u6240\u7522\u751f\u7684\u7591\u554f\u3002.<\/p>\n

    \u6211\u5011\u5728\u6211\u5011\u8eab\u4e0a\u4e5f\u770b\u5230\u4e86\u540c\u6a23\u7684\u6a21\u5f0f \u9999\u6e2fB2B Facebook\u5ee3\u544a\u6848\u4f8b\u7814\u7a76<\/a>\u90a3\u4e9b\u771f\u6b63\u5e36\u4f86\u8aee\u8a62\u7684\u5ee3\u544a\u4e26\u975e\u6700\u5de7\u5999\u7684\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u90a3\u4e9b\u767b\u9678\u9801\u9762\u80fd\u5920\u6e96\u78ba\u56de\u7b54\u5ee3\u544a\u63d0\u51fa\u7684\u554f\u984c\u7684\u5ee3\u544a\u3002.<\/p>\n

    \u7d50\u679c\u56e0\u884c\u696d\u3001\u7522\u54c1\u548c\u9810\u7b97\u800c\u7570\u2014\u2014\u9019\u4e9b\u662f\u4e00\u4f4d\u5ba2\u6236\u5728\u4e00\u500b\u6708\u5167\u7684\u6578\u64da\uff0c\u4e26\u975e\u627f\u8afe\u3002.<\/em><\/p>\n

    \u4e00\u9801\u4e00\u554f\u984c\uff1a\u4e94\u5206\u9418\u81ea\u6211\u6aa2\u67e5<\/h2>\n

    \u9019\u662f\u6700\u4f73\u6a21\u5f0f\u3002\u6bcf\u9801\u53ea\u9700\u4e94\u5206\u9418\uff0c\u800c\u4e14\u7121\u9700\u4efb\u4f55\u5de5\u5177\u3002.<\/p>\n

    \u6253\u958b\u4f60\u7db2\u7ad9\u4e0a\u7684\u4e00\u500b\u9801\u9762\uff0c\u4f9d\u5e8f\u56de\u7b54\u9019\u4e9b\u554f\u984c\u3002\u52d9\u5fc5\u8aa0\u5be6\uff0d\u50f9\u503c\u5b8c\u5168\u5728\u65bc\u4e0d\u8981\u7d66\u81ea\u5df1\u6253\u5206\u6578\u3002.<\/p>\n

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    1. \u672c\u9801\u56de\u7b54\u4e86\u4ec0\u9ebc\u554f\u984c\uff1f<\/strong> \u7528\u5ba2\u6236\u6703\u4f7f\u7528\u7684\u8a9e\u8a00\uff0c\u628a\u5b83\u5beb\u6210\u4e00\u500b\u771f\u6b63\u7684\u554f\u984c\u3002\u5982\u679c\u9700\u8981\u5169\u53e5\u8a71\uff0c\u8aaa\u660e\u9801\u9762\u8a66\u5716\u540c\u6642\u5b8c\u6210\u5169\u9805\u4efb\u52d9\uff0c\u4f46\u5be6\u969b\u4e0a\u5169\u9805\u90fd\u6c92\u5b8c\u6210\u3002.<\/li>\n
    2. \u8ab0\u5728\u554f\u9019\u500b\u554f\u984c\u2500\u2500\u964c\u751f\u4eba\u3001\u6bd4\u8f03\u8005\u9084\u662f\u505a\u6c7a\u5b9a\u7684\u4eba\uff1f<\/strong> Then check where your traffic to this page actually comes from. A page reached from a Google search for your service name is usually “comparing”, not “stranger”.<\/li>\n
    3. \u7b54\u6848\u5728\u7b2c\u4e00\u500b\u756b\u9762\u55ce\uff1f<\/strong> \u4e0d\u662f\u54c1\u724c\u6545\u4e8b\uff0c\u800c\u662f\u7b54\u6848\u3002\u5982\u679c\u8b80\u8005\u9700\u8981\u6efe\u52d5\u9801\u9762\u624d\u80fd\u627e\u5230\u4ed6\u5011\u6240\u9700\u7684\u7522\u54c1\u6216\u670d\u52d9\uff0c\u90a3\u9ebc\u5927\u591a\u6578\u8b80\u8005\u90fd\u4e0d\u6703\u7e7c\u7e8c\u6efe\u52d5\u3002.<\/li>\n
    4. \u4e0b\u4e00\u6b65\u662f\u4ec0\u9ebc\uff1f<\/strong> One. A page with “call us”, “email us”, “book a consultation” and “download our brochure” gives the reader a decision to make about how to decide \u2014 so they postpone.<\/li>\n
    5. \u8b80\u8005\u9019\u6a23\u505a\u6703\u9762\u81e8\u4ec0\u9ebc\u98a8\u96aa\uff1f<\/strong> \u52d9\u5fc5\u660e\u78ba\u8aaa\u660e\uff1a\u8ab0\u6703\u56de\u590d\uff0c\u56de\u590d\u901f\u5ea6\u5982\u4f55\uff0c\u662f\u5426\u9700\u8981\u4ed8\u8cbb\uff0c\u4ee5\u53ca\u662f\u5426\u6703\u7d66\u4ed6\u5011\u5e36\u4f86\u4efb\u4f55\u7fa9\u52d9\u3002\u5c0d\u65bc\u5927\u591a\u6578\u9999\u6e2f\u4e2d\u5c0f\u4f01\u696d\u7db2\u7ad9\u800c\u8a00\uff0c\u672a\u660e\u78ba\u8aaa\u660e\u7684\u98a8\u96aa\u662f\u6700\u6602\u8cb4\u7684\u3002.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n

      Run this across your top five pages by traffic. In our experience the pages that leak hardest are never the ones people expect \u2014 they are the service pages that everyone assumes are “fine”.<\/p>\n

      \u9999\u6e2f\u7368\u6709\u3001\u800c\u4e14\u771f\u4fc2\u5f71\u97ff\u6210\u6548\u5605\u7d30\u7bc0<\/h2>\n

      \u5176\u4e2d\u4e00\u4e9b\u662f\u672c\u5730\u5316\u7684\uff0c\u800c\u5f9e\u7f8e\u570b\u5f15\u9032\u7684\u901a\u7528\u6587\u6848\u5beb\u4f5c\u5efa\u8b70\u537b\u6084\u6084\u5730\u72af\u4e86\u932f\u8aa4\u3002.<\/p>\n